Dame Aphrodite Moonbeam
Hi how are you today?
Hello!
Hello, have you had a good day?
Yes thanks for asking! You?
So, have I.
Hello there, I am probably your age.
We probs both like to have fun.
I like your avatar by the way.
The pretty colour of the sun.
I’m a child author, but my teacher says I’m a poet.
I could combine the two and make a poem book.
I wonder what you’d like to be when you’re older.
Why not write back so I can take a look?
I know you might not have time,
But I love it when people reply,
Make my wish come true,
C’mon, don’t be shy!
I also like people replying back to me.
Hi!
Nurse Fandango Peninsula
1. 150 years in the future. If I knew if something bad was going to happen in 150 years, I’d have the chance to stop it happening now.
2. Telekinesis. If I had telepathy, I could see somebody’s secrets. With telekinesis, I’d be able to pick up things without needing to move.
3. Wonder Woman. Maybe?
4. Forced to sing along to every single song. With dancing I could embarrass myself with singing I can’t. Plus, if I was dancing, I’d get a stitch.
5. Ripped Jeans.
6. Tap Dancer
7. Sing for 45 years. (Why? see answer number 4.)
Hi! How are you?
These are my answers with added explanations…
1. I would go 150 years into the future because there is no point thinking about the past as you can change your reputation in the future. I would also do that to see it an asteroid is coming and warn everyone about it.
2. I would have telekinesis because If I am reading a book and am feeling lazy so I don’t want to turn the page I could use it or in a more serious problem I could settle a fight with it.
3. I would team up with Wonder Woman cuz her real name is Diana (correct me if I am wrong) which is my favourite princess’s name and also cuz girls are the BEST! (No offence to any boy reading this sorry if it has offended you)
4. Dance to every song I hear because I am a really good dancer and I make everyone laugh with my impossible moves of my well known chicken dance and it doesn’t embarrass me.
5. Normal dancer cuz I don’t know tap dancing and like I said on 4 I am a good chicken dancer. Overall I actually don’t like dancing that much.
6. Sing for 45 yrs. reason? I get really annoyed if I get a stitch and also because the singing is less time then the dancing but I do get easily embarrassed if I sing a solo a trio would be fine with my BFF’s.
These were some really good would you rathers! They took up most of my time but I still had fun answering your questions. I especially liked the second one cuz it challenged me but I soon came to a good desicion and came to a reason why and the reason was for a good cause (not the book turning pages one.)
I hope you had fun reading this and I am sorry if it was too long to read! You are probably yawning by now and I should probably be going to an ending point.
I would have Telekinesis because I can see people’s thoughts and I can drop as many things as I want, and I don’t have bend and pick them up! I just use my mind
Marshal Bubbles Rubber-duck
Star Reviewer
I wonder. I hope so. Maybe you could write to the government with your idea!
I’ll try!
Although maybe just start off with your local important people…
Yeah, that sounds reasonable.
Like the council?
Maybe. That’s a really good idea Marshal Bubbles Rubber-Duck.
Thank you.
Your welcome
Some books are made from recyclable paper but I also agree with you. Scientists have predicted that in the distant future half of the Amazon rainforest could be cut down meaning many species could be endangered or exctinct.
I am glad that some resources are being re-used. People need to keep up the good work.
That is a really great idea, but won’t our books be really delicate and what would we write with?
Senorita Cilla Menace
So awesome! It sounds really interesting. If you ever get it published, I’ll definitely read it!
I agree. Do you think you could send more of it once you’ve finished writing it?
Oh, I’d like that too. Will you, Senorita Cilla Menace?
Awesome! Do you think you could write some of your story on this website so we can see it?
It sounds very interesting you could challenge yourself by trying to add more adjectives!
That’s a good idea.
Marshal Bubbles Rubber-duck
Star Reviewer
Me
Definitely me. Music helps too
I’ve tried that before. It helps me. Thanks
I definitely agree with you!
Marshal Morgana Rollerskate
Ummm… Kirklees Library?
Marshal Morgana Rollerskate
Senorita Cilla Menace
Ok! This sounds really good! Here’s some tips from one author to another…
1. Do it in first person. Choose a son/daughter who you think would have some really interesting opinions on their posh life. What do they think of their siblings and parents? Do they wish they weren’t posh? Do they like it?
2. Give it a past. The more the reader knows about before, the more they’ll want to know about later. But keep something hidden, something the main character won’t find out about until near the end.
3. Twist, twist, twist! Give your reader a good shock. What could it be? A sibling turns out to be adopted? A big move? A dead uncle? If your reader can see the whole storyline coming, they might not recommend the book, or they might even stop reading.
4. Use description! Put the picture in the reader’s head. Sometimes, when someone has illustrations in their book, they decide not to use so much description. This doesn’t work! A good book has good description. Listen to your teachers moan about adjectives and adverbs! Trust me, it helps!
The big house= The vast, whitewashed mansion standing proud on a flat street.
5. Give the main character a good imagination. If they are different from the family, wild and imaginative, the reader will want to see how they react to their posh life.
6. Research the names. This may sound weird, but a name can have a backstory. Google, ‘Meaning of name…’ or ‘Names that mean…’ and you can really feel the character, even when the reader can only know if THEY research.
Hope you love my tips! Remember to use your imagination, and font break your writing flow!
wow!
Thank you and you’re welcome!
Hi not sure if my idea is really good but:
1. Make them live in palace or mansion.
2. Make them talk in a kind of french accent?
thats a good idea
