Hi

Nurse Sunny Glitterball
On page 22 or somewhere around there is the start of chapter one if my story, Coille Danachd. On page 3 or somewhere around there is the second part of chapter one. Here’s the last part of chapter one and a bit if chapter two.
I crashed through the ice. My weight alone would have sank all the way to the halfway point of the huge, black lake. But clutching this rock? I let go of the massive boulder and watched it sink into the darkness. I was slowly floating downwards. I had no energy to fight back, to swim, to float…a large chunk of ice floated towards me. I struggled, but it was no use. I made the biggest mistake…I screamed. Water flooded into my lungs and the shard of ice collided with my head. I was knocked out, both by the lack of oxygen and the hit on my head…
Two
I heard panting. I felt air. I smelt sweat. I tasted frost. I saw…a wolf cub. It was dragging me out by the hem of my feather tunic. “Attaboy, Fang!” a boy’s voice cried proudly. I saw a young male figure striding towards me and I coughed up a load of water.

Empress Magnolia Cuckoo-Clock
It’s so thrilling, builds up the suspense… And then leaves it on an ellipsis (cliff hanger).
Nurse Sunny Glitterball
That’s strange.
Major Quicksand Fink
My blog: My life of Environment, books and everything in between
Hello everybody! I am happy to say that my blog will continue, thanks to all your likes and replies! I love hearing from you and would love it if you started a blog, whether it was similar or different to mine.
Now, I would like to announce I am one of the most colossal Harry Potter Fangirls ever! I know tonnes of you have read/seen Harry Potter and love it, so let me tell you what I did for a step forward…
I googled JK Rowling’s address and I wrote to her! And I got a reply! Yes, a reply from the legendary JK Row.ing! She even wrote my name! She was happy to hear I am a big fan of Harry Potter and she said she’s always wanted to be an author! Just like me! Her first story was written when she was six, about a rabbit called Rabbit. She showed it to her mum and she said, “That’s lovely, darling,”. So Joanne (JK Rowling) stood there thinking, ‘Well, get it published then!’ Classic!
Well, that’s all from me today! I’m out!

Empress Magnolia Cuckoo-Clock
Hey, you know that fact
You said in this post
About the rabbit called Rabbit
The first story she wrote?
Well in pretty sure
I heard that before
Maybe in school
But it sounds familiar!
Director Birthday-cake Pudding-Basin
Awesome
Fairy Heroica Rollerskate
OMGG WOWWW!!!!!! I can’t believe you actually got a reply! I want to write to Rick Riordan (the writer of the Percy Jackson novel series) but when I googled his address, it says he doesn’t reply to letters.
Nurse Sunny Glitterball
Have u been to Harry Potter studios in London? It’s absolutely amazing with all of the noises and special effects. Especially in the Forbidden Forest where they make a thick mist to set the scene. The giant spiders can actually crawl! It’s sooooo cooooool!
Judge Bubbles Banana
Hi all! How are your holidays going? Any fun places you’ve visited?

Anonymous
I haven’t been many places but my friend has another dog and my other friend has two new cats.
Director Birthday-cake Pudding-Basin
Lovely!!!!
Mademoiselle Beany Pumpernickel
Where have you been?
Seen any cool things?
Read any good books?
Seen anything with wings?
Director Birthday-cake Pudding-Basin
Ooh nice!
Anonymous
The cats are so cute..
Director Birthday-cake Pudding-Basin
Yes!
Anonymous
My friend says she’s gonna eat them
Director Birthday-cake Pudding-Basin
Oh!
Anonymous
Not actually!
Director Birthday-cake Pudding-Basin
Ohh! Haha!
Anonymous
At least, that’s what I THINK…… Just kidding
Director Birthday-cake Pudding-Basin
The cats are Guss and Maple
Both really small
And the dog is called Nala
Also not so tall
Director Birthday-cake Pudding-Basin
I went to Longleat Festival of Lights, Roald Dahl theme!
Empress Magnolia Cuckoo-Clock
Oh wow! I have been to Longleat Zoo, it’s great!
Anonymous
I went to a panto in London
King Poseidon Glitterball
Oh nice! What was it about?
Anonymous
Merry Christmas!

Director Sapphire Quest
Merry Christmas!
Director Birthday-cake Pudding-Basin
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Empress Magnolia Cuckoo-Clock
Merry Christmas to you too!
Anonymous
And to you
King Poseidon Glitterball
Hello everyone
What’s up, how you doing?
I’m a bit bored
Cause I have nothing to do!

Director Birthday-cake Pudding-Basin
You should read a book!
Marshal Bubbles Rubber-duck
Yeah, that’s what I’m thinking
But I got a problem you see
I can’t find any books
That I know I will read!
Director Birthday-cake Pudding-Basin
Lol!
Director Sapphire Quest
I know how you feel
King Poseidon Glitterball
Thanks for your reply
I’m glad to have your sympathy
But can I ask a question?
Do you know what I should read?
Director Birthday-cake Pudding-Basin
Hi, I want to write a book but every time I start writing I decide to rewrite the book because it either doesn’t have enough action or doesn’t include any adjectives but has a lot of action.
Also I have decided to start writing every few days to get an idea of what I want to write and how I can keep it balanced. I have a few bits that you might want me to share so if you want me to share some of my writing just reply by saying that you want to hear about it.
Thanks ( plz tell me how to keep my writing balanced if you have any tips)
If you want any book recommendations just tell me if your reading for older years or younger and I can give you some recommendations.
Thanks!

Judge Bubbles Banana
I think you should ask Empress Mongolia Cuckoo Clock or Principal Ursula Menace for some writing tips if needed because they both have written some good stories.
Director Birthday-cake Pudding-Basin
Thank you
Judge Bubbles Banana
Has anybody read Dork Diaries or Diary of a Wimpy Kid books? if you have please leave a comment and tell me which one is you favourite(if you have one) or which one you would recommend me.

Doctor Lacey Windchime
Yeah, have you read Drama Queen in Dork Diaries? There is a lot of Mackenzie. And I also like Old School in the Diary of a wimpy kid series
Director Birthday-cake Pudding-Basin
I love drama Queen too, Its really funny
Anonymous
Hey, I like your name
Popcorn! It’s great!
And as for what you said
What other Dork Diaries books have you read?
Director Birthday-cake Pudding-Basin
Both are okay. Dork Diaries are more for older readers and Diary of a Wimpy Kid is a bit more childish.
Nurse Sunny Glitterball
My favourite diary of the wimpy kid book is ‘Diary Of The Wimpy Kid Rodrick rules’ , I recommend you to read it is very good !!!!!
Ambassador Tyler Chipperfield
Diary of the Wimpy Kid is my Favourite book. I like Cabin Fever. I’ve also watched the movie.
Empress Candyfloss Palm-tree
double down wimpy kid
Dame Cupcake Postage-Stamp
I have read both diary of a wimpy kid is childrens classics and one of my favourite. Dork diaries depends on what you like.
Judge Bubbles Banana
yeah I love frenemies but diary of a wimpy kid isn’t nearly as good!!!!
Anonymous
diary of a wimpy kid old school is unforgettable
King Poseidon Glitterball