Officer Bunny Biscuits
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Do you have any book recommendations for teens . . . ?
Madam Wanda Bungalow
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so mine is called Evie she loves to read, her dream job is to become a book editor bye the time she’s ten she’s sent a book that has not been published or edited and the author wrote an email to her saying she was the one going to edit her book it was Evie’s dream come true. Anyway thats more of a story Evie lives with her mum and dad. She is one of the popular girls at school so when she starts editing authors books and is famous she is the most popular person in the school and she’s only in year 5. Evie is a kind and good friend so she tries her best to see her friends in her spare time ( which isn’t very offen)
I tried my best
thanks
Well, I guess you win given as no one else entered!
Congrats! Evie sounds really nice!
Hang on does that mean I should not write another paragraph because Officer Bunny Biscuits has already won
No, I don’t think officer saw that message so we can just ignore it given as you entered! If one more person enters I’ll judge.
I’ll try here goes nothing:
A young seven year old girl named Mily lived with her mum and dad in a beautiful house near the meadow.She was a kind girl with golden hair and bright twinkly eyes. In most of the peaceful afternoon’s Mily went in to the meadow with her parents and had picnics there while watching the beautiful sunset after that they would go back home and Mily got changed to her nightdress she liked wearing the nightdress with the pink and red heart and if not that one then she would wear the one that her mum had stitched her name onto.
Was that ok?
That sounds great! Mily sounds like a lovely person. I love how you went into lots of details about her night dress. The only problem I noticed was that most of it was one sentence. But apart from that, WELL DONE!!!
Thanks and about the one sentence problem when I start writing something I like it’s too hard to concentrate on punctuation and end up having to look through my text and edit it . If you’d like me to rewrite it I’d be happy to add extra as well . Madam Wanda Bungalow when will you reveal the winner .
P.S please can I do one more
And yes you can do another if you want!
That’s ok I know what you mean I forget about punctuation sometimes as well lol! You dont need to edit it out it’s fine. And I’ll reveal the winner when there are a couple more people who’ve actually replied to this competition because at the moment theres only two!
Should I edit it or not Madan Wanda Bungalow
Ok I won’t edit
Mademoiselle Magnolia Pineapple
I love that book too!
Hi, this summer I am going to try to read 8 books, my fave book series is the Lottie Brooks series. Highly recommended
My goal for this summer is 100 books.
That’s amazing
I have read over 15 books this summer
I have read over 15 books this summer
Same
The truth is, I have read hundreds of books and I don’t count…
Doctor Quicksand Sausage-Roll
Director Phoenix Sequins
you click on the avatar and then scroll down to see a save button (press it)
It’s cause you need to unlock it
Director Phoenix Sequins
You have to scroll to the bottom of the avatar pictures and you should see a button that says save.
That should work!
Thx!!!!
You need to unlock it
Prince Cornetto Sudoku
Principal Fifi Unicycle
me too
When did you start
