Anybody want book recommendations you can ask me
Officer Bunny Biscuits
Star Reviewer
Do you have any book recommendations for teens . . . ?
Dame Esmerelda Biscuits
Guys I’m going to stay with some friends and then I’m going to Wales so I won’t be here for the next week. Here’s a competition: Design a character, tell me everything about them, at least a paragraph please! I’ll give a prize when I get back for the most realistic, detailed character.
Madam Wanda Bungalow
Star Reviewer
so mine is called Evie she loves to read, her dream job is to become a book editor bye the time she’s ten she’s sent a book that has not been published or edited and the author wrote an email to her saying she was the one going to edit her book it was Evie’s dream come true. Anyway thats more of a story Evie lives with her mum and dad. She is one of the popular girls at school so when she starts editing authors books and is famous she is the most popular person in the school and she’s only in year 5. Evie is a kind and good friend so she tries her best to see her friends in her spare time ( which isn’t very offen)
I tried my best
thanks
Officer Bunny Biscuits
Well, I guess you win given as no one else entered!
Congrats! Evie sounds really nice!
Madam Wanda Bungalow
Hang on does that mean I should not write another paragraph because Officer Bunny Biscuits has already won
Queen Gloriana Hungry-Hippo
No, I don’t think officer saw that message so we can just ignore it given as you entered! If one more person enters I’ll judge.
Madam Wanda Bungalow
I’ll try here goes nothing:
A young seven year old girl named Mily lived with her mum and dad in a beautiful house near the meadow.She was a kind girl with golden hair and bright twinkly eyes. In most of the peaceful afternoon’s Mily went in to the meadow with her parents and had picnics there while watching the beautiful sunset after that they would go back home and Mily got changed to her nightdress she liked wearing the nightdress with the pink and red heart and if not that one then she would wear the one that her mum had stitched her name onto.
Was that ok?
Queen Gloriana Hungry-Hippo
That sounds great! Mily sounds like a lovely person. I love how you went into lots of details about her night dress. The only problem I noticed was that most of it was one sentence. But apart from that, WELL DONE!!!
Madam Wanda Bungalow
Thanks and about the one sentence problem when I start writing something I like it’s too hard to concentrate on punctuation and end up having to look through my text and edit it . If you’d like me to rewrite it I’d be happy to add extra as well . Madam Wanda Bungalow when will you reveal the winner .
P.S please can I do one more
Queen Gloriana Hungry-Hippo
And yes you can do another if you want!
Madam Wanda Bungalow
That’s ok I know what you mean I forget about punctuation sometimes as well lol! You dont need to edit it out it’s fine. And I’ll reveal the winner when there are a couple more people who’ve actually replied to this competition because at the moment theres only two!
Madam Wanda Bungalow
Should I edit it or not Madan Wanda Bungalow
Queen Gloriana Hungry-Hippo
Ok I won’t edit
Queen Gloriana Hungry-Hippo
Hi guys!
I love reading, do you? I am trying to read 6-10 books this summer. How many books have you guys read? What is your favourite book series? Mine is Dork Diaries. If you want any recommendations for books, ask me!
Talk to you soon!
Mademoiselle Magnolia Pineapple
I love that book too!
Mayor Chilli Teacup
Hi, this summer I am going to try to read 8 books, my fave book series is the Lottie Brooks series. Highly recommended
Principal Jet Satellite
My goal for this summer is 100 books.
Dame Esmerelda Biscuits
That’s amazing
Coach Mars Legend
I have read over 15 books this summer
Captain Adolpho Mouse
I have read over 15 books this summer
Captain Adolpho Mouse
Same
Coach Mars Legend
The truth is, I have read hundreds of books and I don’t count…
Coach Mars Legend
Everyone like this
Doctor Quicksand Sausage-Roll
Hi guys, does anybody know how to change ur avatar? When i try pressing the ’change avatar ’ button, and then i click the avatar i want, but it doesnt show up!
Director Phoenix Sequins
you click on the avatar and then scroll down to see a save button (press it)
Nurse Rose Sofa
It’s cause you need to unlock it
Coach Mars Legend
Hi guys, does anybody know how to change ur avatar? When i try pressing the ’change avatar ’ button, and then i click the avatar i want, but it doesnt show up!
Director Phoenix Sequins
You have to scroll to the bottom of the avatar pictures and you should see a button that says save.
That should work!
Mayor Chilli Teacup
Thx!!!!
Director Phoenix Sequins
You need to unlock it
Coach Mars Legend
I’ve just completed my reading challenge within 3 weeks to spare!
Prince Cornetto Sudoku
Hi I am new
Principal Fifi Unicycle
me too
Madam Cilla Jamboree
When did you start
Coach Mars Legend