hello peeps how are u

Hi! I love reading as well as writing! I’ve worte a story and I’m wondering if any of you will like it so I’m gonna put the story here(Tips would be helpful!)

the story:

The unwanted kitten.

Tiny was a small cat that lived at 24 Kingsdon Lane. Well that’s half true…she used to live there. You see she was abandoned a week ago by her unloving owners. They said she was naughty and disobedient. But all she needed was some love and care. They obviously thought she was a bad kitty but she wasn’t, she was just trying to be helpful.

Anyhow she was walking down the damp road and was soaking wet (it was raining). The poor little kitten was shivering in the cold and in fear. She didn’t just fear dogs she feared humans! Infact she hates them! She called them the two legged creatures. The main reason for this because it’s the way they treat her and her little cat friends. In case you haven’t guessed the humans have treated her very badly.

Tiny was hungry (she didn’t eat for 2 days)! After a while of walking, she was really thirsty! She looked around to see a small, dirty puddle. Even though it was dirty she went over and started drinking.

After drinking all the water in the dirty puddle she noticed that there was a small figure coming towards her. She looked even harder to notice that the figure was a bit bigger than her but there was not much difference in her opinion. As the figure got closer she recognised the ‘figure’ which was actually the next door neighbour’s dog. She hated the dog; he was one of the main reasons that she got kicked out of her lovely warm house by her owners. “Leave me alone!” Shouted Tiny in her small sweet voice. But all it came out as was ‘meow’! The dog sniggered with drool coming from his massive mouth. He gave a big grin showing his unhygienic teeth which was not at all glistening! Infact it was the complete opposite!
He started to walk faster towards the hopeless kitten! Tiny started to walk backwards slowly and in a couple of seconds later the little kitten ran fearfully from the angry dog. Tiny ran as fast as her little legs could take her. Her small heart started to beat even faster than normal. She started to panic. Suddenly, she saw a big tree. She quickly rushed over towards to it and started to climb it. Once she reached the very top, she took the risk to look down. The Furious dog was growling with anger and frustration. After a while of trying to climb the tree he finally left and went home for his supper.

Oh I forget to mention about Tiny’s huge fear of heights. Tiny looked down and realised that she was a long distance from ground. She cried for help in her small voice but no help came, the street remained silent except from the quiet sound of the wind. The cat started to get cold and started to get sleepy. She was very much tried she couldn’t afford waiting for help she started to close her eye lids and before she knew it she was fast asleep on the top of a very large tree. While she was a sleep, a girl called Emily (who lived at 27 Kingsdon lane) saw the poor kitten and felt sympathy for her so she decided to climb the tree and rescue the cat. She managed to free the kitten. She ran towards her house and begged her mum if she could keep the kitty. After a lot of arguing and shouting her mum, finally, agreed.

Tiny the small kitty now lives at 72 Kingsdon Lane with Emily.

my 3 favourite authors are :

first of all, it is Erin Hunter, she has written the Warrior Cats series’ and I love them! I have read 39 of her (‘their’, it is actually 4 people!) books and they are AMAZING!!!!!

my second favourite author is Suzanne Collins. she wrote the Hunger Games series. they are so emotional and dramatic, I have read all 3 books and 2/2 films!

my third favourite author(s) are Laura Lam, Michael Scott, Michael Morpurgo and Jeff Kinney. Laura Lam has written the Michah Grey series they are so dramatic and gripping! Michael Scott has written the ‘secrets of the immortal Nicholas Flamel’ series and they are so gripping and funny. And for the other 2, you have probably heard of them.

P.S. I am really worried about the SATs exams which are happening in 5 weeks! I find it really hard and boring to revise, so any advice on how to take my mind of it!?

Hey Coach L. Tyrannosaurus,
David Walliams is a very good and funny author. I know I have only read one of his books but I was still wiping tears of laughter off my face, it is the book you have read- Billionaire boy. Unfortunately, I wasn’t able to get any other books but I didn’t mind!

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